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Dickinson's Two Butterflies went out at Noon

A Mystical Flight

Nov 14, 2009 Linda Sue Grimes

Emily Dickinson's gift of imagining supernaturally is on display in this fanciful piece that dramatizes the mystical flight of two butterflies.

Emily Dickinson’s “Two Butterflies went out at Noon” (#533 in Thomas H. Johnson's The Complete Poems of Emily Dickinson) creates a little drama featuring two butterflies that embark on an incredible journey. The drama reveals the mystical nature of Dickinson’s consciousness.

First Stanza: “Two Butterflies went out at Noon”

The speaker reports, “Two Butterflies went out at Noon,” and they “waltzed above a Farm.” At this point, the speaker can observe the creatures, but from where they came is a mystery; they just suddenly appear at “Noon.” They did not go out of any location; the only way the reader can locate the butterflies is by time, not place.

The mysterious report does not even locate the observer: was she outside when she perceived these butterflies? But if she had actually seen them, why does she not reveal where they “went out” from?

The speaker/observer then claims that these butterflies, after completing their waltz above the farm, “stepped straight through the Firmament” where they “rested on a Beam.” Just as the butterflies suddenly appear out of nowhere, they vanish into the sky.

The speaker can no longer see them with her physical eyes, but nevertheless, she reports that they “rested on a Beam.” The speaker’s cosmic or mystic eye can see them as they recline on a ray of sunshine.

The reader then understands that the speaker is not merely reporting about physical butterflies she has actually seen with her physical eyes; she is making a metaphorical comparison of the nature of thoughts, for it is only thoughts have the power to appear out of nowhere and vanish beyond the sky with such felicity and velocity.

Second Stanza: “And then—together bore away”

From their position beyond the vault of the sky, the butterfly-thoughts “bore away / Upon a shining Sea.” As swiftly and seamlessly as they “stepped straight through the Firmament,” they steal away and glide without a water vessel over the ocean.

The speaker remarks that although these amazing butterfly-thoughts took to the sea, they never stopped to visit “any Port.” She is sure that if their presence had been detected, “their coming” would have been “mentioned,” yet it never was. At this point, the little drama mounts, leaving the reader wondering where those itinerant butterflies will go next.

Third Stanza: “If spoken by the distant Bird”

But the speaker shrewdly evades the ultimate question of where the butterflies finally settle, proclaiming that if someone has ever seen them since, no one has ever reported their whereabouts. But the information revealed in her report of no information fills out the drama.

Who might have spoken of the whereabouts of these roaming butterflies? They might have been spotted by some “distant Bird”; surely that bird would have spoken up and reported on their whereabouts. Or if folks in a ship or even a “merchantman” might have seen them, they surely would have reported.

But the unlikely prospect of meeting these creatures is, of course, that they are ethereal; they are invisible, and go unseen through the air, sky, and sea. They go swiftly, quietly and even the one doing the thinking, the one entertaining those butterfly-thoughts will have to admit that she might take no notice of them—unless, of course, she fashions a poetic drama to display them.

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